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The Truth

Postby JMG » Apr 24th, '07, 05:03

if we legalized weed would the peoples cries proceed
but its banned by the evil eyes of greed
not lettin us relax are brain they would lack a gain
so its a tax thing iliterate politics
they prohibit it just to be a couple more dollars rich
then illegally the hipocrits profit it for war gear it seems
weird to me it appears to be a conspiracy
but its clear its greed and they wont compramise
just fill us with constent lies and homacide
if u could see though bush and osamas eyes
ud see the towers to be a dollar sign
so they knock em down for the profit prize
but they will never apolgize or stop the cries
so i guess we have no choice but to optimize
cuz they cant rob are mind so they drop a line
plot an try to hook and real us in
and the wheel will spin but they cant steal my pen
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Postby Rae » Apr 24th, '07, 20:19

oh haha i thought this was gonna be a diss to Steve aka Truth.

hmm anyways ... i like it.
i've neva read anything i didnt like by u so far.

keep it up hunn! ;)

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Postby JMG » Apr 25th, '07, 04:09

haha i have no reason to diss him

but thanks :8)
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 25th, '07, 04:39

it's pretty good, you should do audio, i wanna hear those lyrics not read them.
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