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[Rain Matrix]

I can do nothing Fallings Calling, we All Bring Small Things, just look at a Trigger Mans Touch
theres 1 Fixture Mister, but Some Pictures Differ, snakes Slither and Fuss, cuz lifes Bigger Than Us

I feel like Humanity's Canopy, u Plan 2 Be Calllamity, Lose Sanity Thru Vanity, Let Me Speak
u won't see Scripting Limit Me, I'm Depicting Imagery, visuals Set Free Peek, truth is my Recipe

I'm Losing Track, pain is Moving Back, I just spent 24 hours Proving That, I'm only Using Facts
I've Toasted Few, cuz if my Ghost Kid View, I use Memories 4 Energy, regrets won't keep U Intact

fight Or Be Scared, tha Story Aired, I am More Prepared, demons make tha Steps Ahead Violent
I'm Sitting Down, it must be Written Now, u won't find it In Bounds, like if we Left Tha Said Silent

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if you flow bars that long ill give you a million pound

[C-Game]

good lyrics man

but i think u have 16 bars in there
but its kool

[James R.]

You could probably cut each line in half. You had some nice vocab in this and the lyrics were pretty good. The main issue was the length of the lines, if it was on audio it might sound ok but that depends on the speed at which you speak.