Rediculous Lyricist

[4D]

Just did this last night messin around in work. It's not finished yet, and as you can see I didn't fuss about with the structure too much, but thought I'd post it anyway see what ye think. I know it's fucked up, but this is the shit that I always end up doing, I must be a psycho or somethin.



If it's written shit, I`m a physicist, I`m a rediculous lyricist,
Kinda meticulous slittin wrists with a wire-snips 'n scissors kit,
My little sisters sick 'cos I swift dig her with my disfigured dick,
And then when she's gittin' kip I strip her knicks and lick her clit
I gripped her tit and bit her nip until I ripped skin and blistered it
Then I kissed her lips as my fingertips poked and picked her shit,
I`m the sickest prick you ever met, I awake and can't remember sex
MY pants 'n bed are wrecked, bloodstained from the black 'n decker set,
It's like the Manson member sect broke in and began ta sever necks
My skank dismembered ex lies in the bed splashed with red effects,
I go blank if ever vexed and no tellin who'll crack my temper next,
A bitch with vast 'n tender breasts or a teller at the banks treasure chest?
A nurse who lacks tenderness or a friend that acts treacherous?
I can never guess, My heads a mess, it's calibration is on-da-slide,
My imagination is optimised for plannin and activation of homicide,
Trappin'-asian ass hottie-types to feed my fascination with body-size,
My rack is ancient it modifies, their eyes glancin'-facin' it horrifed,
Last calculations are quantified and they're strapped-placed-in it strongly-tied

[James R.]

Damn that shit was sick... in every sense of the word... That's like some old Slim Shady type shit lol. But for real the multies in there were ILL. Definitely delivered the multi flow like no one else I seen on this site. You remind me of this cat I know names Tite, he uses the multi flow a lot, we weren't all that cool, but I respected what he did. Hot shit man.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

holy damn shit!
that is sick....

[4D]

Lol, thanks for the comments people. Welcome to the site James, that's the level I try to keep all my scripts at. I`m not the only one either, there's some other talented lyrical types on herer too, but most of them save their shit for audios and tourneys.

[IceAxe]

some very ill shit... i bow before your lyrical ability

[Tash8]

that's disgusting but AMAZING nonetheless


EDIT: you should ghost write for bizare

[4D]

Haha, nah man, not even Bizarre could make my shit acceptable, i`m too extreme for that, it's like someone handed Jaffrey Dahmer a Mic

[Tash8]

Haha, nah man, not even Bizarre could make my shit acceptable, i`m too extreme for that, it's like someone handed Jaffrey Dahmer a Mic

haha, wwell hot shit man, I'd love to hear more.. btw did you write to a beat or what? cuz how could you have such good flow with no beat lol

[shady_soul]

good shit man, keep'em coming
peace

[Ka0t1c]

thats some great writing, inspires me to rap like that again...almost