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Math Class Pain

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Math Class Pain

Postby Tash8 » May 15th, '07, 21:30

wrote this during math class today

this slim-pain, in my skim-brain, is very much in-sane
and it-drains, all of my flesh-and-viens, and death-retained
it struck-me in the face, so violently in waste
the side-of-me bled in craze, the strike was tyrantly fast-paced
but I stood up in my past-place, you can masturbate on my gaze
in different ways, I sprayed-waves, while sitting my math class
dread-depraved, lying their sleeping like I'm afraid-but-brave
brave, because I got this sense of leniency to sleep-in-class
but 'fraid cause of oversleeping but I need-to-pass that-class
I wake-fast, the pain that deprived me has then past.

feed please

thanks
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Postby IceAxe » May 15th, '07, 21:39

Ok.

first, let me say i dont wanna "mastubate on your gaze"

multis seemed decent.

cant really leave full feed cuz Im semi-busy, I might later though... if i feel like it
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Postby Tash8 » May 16th, '07, 03:38

thanks,

I made an accapella for this in the audio section if ya wanna check it out.
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Postby Tash8 » May 18th, '07, 00:50

bump
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Postby sixersi349 » May 18th, '07, 04:06

another nice verse
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