The Simple Mind Of A Simple Man

[4D]

DOPE!

GReat ending to it, I like the way you've been expanding your vocab in the last year man, noticed it a while ago, you do like the big words. But, that's all god, 'cos they all seem to be used in the correct context. Was a few lines I really liked there man, one of my favourites was "im sick of emulating mimics when people try to be sinical", that was a touch of class, also a very cool ending to it, last line was top drawer!

[TheWeirdoIsBack]

Goddamn man this is some sick stuff. A few words in there I had to look-up lol. How long it take you to write this?

Lookin' forward to your disc man, hope it goes platinum .

[4D]

Wow from you that means more than you can imagine, thanks man..

Well, thanks for the compliment. I know, it used to be you were the rapper I was the lyricist, but you've been working hard at improving you're shit, and I have to say very successfully, me on the other hand, haven't bothered with the rappin side of things.

[4D]

Well, if that's true man, awesome. I couldn't ask for more, I only do it for the feedback and the respect from my peers.

I hope you really push to make a go of the rap dream man, you really have the talent to do it, anyone who can freestyle and spit the way you do, deserves some recognition. Don't give up on iti!!


Now, let's put an end to this dicksuckingfest!