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It Turned Out Like This

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It Turned Out Like This

Postby Rain Matrix » May 20th, '07, 16:40

disbelief is something u BETTER MURDER
cuz I know, I would NEVER HURT HER
this is how relationships BEGIN PLAIN
I'm used 2 seeing ME IN PAIN
these demons their ALL BASTARDS
I'm down and out, as I FALL FASTER
with tha soul I must TRADE OR FREE
this is tha reality I've MADE 4 ME
I vanish tha view of my GRIM SELF
it vanish's me as my SKIN MELTS
anguish somehow I've SURVIVED YEARS
it seems tha rain is YUR DRIED TEARS
thoughts are what are minds KILL WITH
luckily tha part of u in me STILL LIVES
I know u can't get NEAR ME HERE
my motivation is CLEARLY FEAR
my heart, this time IT CHOSE LOVE
unceartinty needs 2 be DISPOSED OF
my life it STAYS ROUGH
it doesn't help, I don't SAY MUCH
I won't be tha 1 that GAVE UP
most of tha world is busy STEALING PRIDE
it's all an illusion, I know how I FEEL INSIDE
believe me, I never knew it would START THIS WAY
u are my sunshine, I hope this isn't my DARKEST DAY
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Postby Enimee » May 20th, '07, 17:00

dude as always that was hot
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Postby 4D » May 20th, '07, 19:16

Best you've shown so far, very very good man. And with a theme to the verse too, nice to drop those real rhymes every so often.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » May 20th, '07, 19:27

that was great man. really liked it. the theme all the way through made it even better, and it was pretty deep too. keep it up man.
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