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The Kids

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The Kids

Postby Renegade » Oct 5th, '05, 01:14

little kids at five bein desensitised to violence
once they've seen one of their loved ones silenced
kids are supposed to be playing with eachother having fun
but now even suburban kids won't hesitate to pick up a gun
children selling crack before they even go to kindergarten
the obstacles in their life in time will harden
elementary schools are getting shot up by students
back in the day nobody would think that their kids would know this
mothers finding drugs in the bookbags of their pre-teens
their lives are just like Arnold Schwarzeneggar movie scenes
it's time for parents to take action against all of this, teach kids a lesson
children's souls filled with sin, it could have been been prevented if they were given discipline
teachers finding kindergarten students dead on the playground
the poor child heard a gunshot as the very last sound he would ever hear and now he's 6 feet in the ground
children at 7 standing on counter with an AK-47 aiming at the head of the clerk of seven eleven
demanding money, and all the parents say "the media corrupted our poor little Kevin"
when it's the parents thought for not taking the action necessary
the last thing the parent sees is their son holding the gun then they see the gunfire start flarin
the ironic part is that the gun is the present the kid got last December
once a kid learns how to shoot he will always and forever remember
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Postby j_shady » Oct 5th, '05, 02:29

that was good man, some powerful stuff
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"I never bow down, and never say doubt/To whom it may concern and whom so ever may try/i'm forever westside and the feather-weight dies/Tell em take ya best shot gon get yourself hot/cus I yelled Bankhead and you felt left out
I ain't mention yo name thats what all this bout"
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