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Postby James R. » May 22nd, '07, 00:12

Stuck sittin limp in the dark wit the door closed
Light slippin through door frame with the air flow
Hands and feet bound by its power and its mass
Accordin to the watch it
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Postby Tash8 » May 22nd, '07, 00:17

so basically like my unable to compose right?

yea sick as always, like i said to angie
do something bad so we can give diff feed.
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Postby James R. » May 22nd, '07, 00:21

yeah smtn like it, but i didnt want it to seem like a writers block song. like creativity was locked inside of a closet while all this inspiring shit was going on right outside the door.

thanks for the feed. i'll try to write smtn whack next time lol
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Postby Tash8 » May 22nd, '07, 00:24

^ lol i dont think it's even possible for ya

btw how old are ya?
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Postby James R. » May 22nd, '07, 00:36

hahaha yeah i get writer's block all the fuckin time. thats why before that 100 bar shit i did i hadnt been in the creative writing section. but i'm 17
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Postby joelle » May 22nd, '07, 00:36

he's 17

and you fucking own Jam. Also..I soo gave you the idea to write about writer's block. So cookies for me.

btw..don't post at the same time as me. Fuckup.
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Postby Tash8 » May 22nd, '07, 00:43

damn, 17 and you could do that, just damn

amazing
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Postby James R. » May 22nd, '07, 00:50

lol why how old is everyone else?
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Postby IceAxe » May 22nd, '07, 00:55

^ mostly from like 15-18 with a few exceptions

and hot shit James... keep it up
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Postby C-Game » May 22nd, '07, 17:45

IceAxe wrote:^ mostly from like 15-18 with a few exceptions

and hot shit James... keep it up


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Postby James R. » May 22nd, '07, 21:03

Thanks? Uppin.
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Postby Rain Matrix » May 22nd, '07, 21:56

23, But Tha Rain Neva Gets Old

sweet flow but come on, writing about writers block, thats like saying I was 2 pussy 2 kill him, only 2 real lize he's not responding at all... whatsoever... even a lil bit... :smoking:

U guys are trippen me out man...
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