I need some second opinions

[Ethos]

I've been trying to work on my flow and my lyrics a lot lately and I came out with these two verses last night. My only problem is, I'm fighting with myself to see if they really go together and if they seem to stay on topic.
So can anyone give me an opinion to what they think.

[Verse]
Let me put this lyrically, meaning my own sincerity,
Impurity is broken, and yes bruh you aint heard of me,
I'm leaving this world with some certainty in my words,
Forget blunts, guns, and school, I'm repping my life first,
I perspire, this fire, until a day that i'm tired,
I'd be a liar, if I say that I'll ever be tired,
People calling me a wigger, just cuz I can rap,
Maybe, It's time for me to show them a real whitey black,
I slowly let them know, that I ain't an el negro,
Then without warning, bust a fucking freestyle, yo,
I bust it out hardcore, what for, so then they don't retaliate,
If they try to do that, Then I'll go and get the rake,
I'll bust your face wide open, no remorse for my actions,
My only satisfaction, is waking up like what the fuck just happened,
I can see my future coming, It's a wonderful site,
Everybody is burning, but I'm still all right, haha

[Verse]
I've felt like i've been slain, deranged, in pain, thanks to a vein,
Severed in the brain, cut with a chain,
Smacked with a cane, then changed planes, hit by a train,
Now, tell me, can i ever try to be exactly the same,
I'm insane, never sane, like 20 keys of novacane,
Yes Maan, I'm playing this game, like i'm rap's genius,
Yes genius, here's where I pull out my penis,
And put your lips on it, taste the power, yeah I'm so serious (haha)
I'm an incarnation, best respect the incantations,
You threaten me, then you're messing with a satan,
Satanic, demonic, fighting child, Ironic as life is idle,
Yeah it's Sy's battle, but I"m not losing in any close while,
I got flow, I got lyricism,
My thesis, Is no one can take this style from my existing,
I'll leave a lot of people guessing where I'll be going next,
So, just keep my words in mind, and start to hold your breath,

[Rain Matrix]

this is kind like crackhead la mans class and I'm not pregnaught but actuall brah this kicked some ass it need anotha verse

[Ethos]

this is kind like crackhead la mans class and I'm not pregnaught but actuall brah this kicked some ass it need anotha verse

I plan on making a third. I have the start already. I just needed to make sure if these verses sounded close together.

[Ethos]

lol thanks. you dont know how much that really means to me.