I want ya'll to check this shit out, this is lyrics from my unrecorded song "Cold". I'm from Russia so you probably may find some grammar mistakes and shit. And please, give your opinion, I really need it.
Let me tell you about place where I
Pistolpoppin wrote:Nice song man
IceAxe wrote:Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.
For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...
The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where I
Tash8 wrote:IceAxe wrote:Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.
For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...
The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where I
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shady4life! wrote:Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where IThe movement is here
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Blind wrote:shady4life! wrote:Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where IIf u dont like the way i act then blow me, i ride with the real peeps who know me.
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Tash8 wrote:^ tere's a difference of battles and creative writing...
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