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THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Blind » Jun 5th, '07, 17:01

I want ya'll to check this shit out, this is lyrics from my unrecorded song "Cold". I'm from Russia so you probably may find some grammar mistakes and shit. And please, give your opinion, I really need it.

Let me tell you about place where I
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby westpsyco » Jun 5th, '07, 23:02

Who does this song?
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Blind » Jun 6th, '07, 08:26

This is my song, I wrote it. C'mon, feed on that shit!!!!!! :smoking:
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Pistolpoppin » Jun 6th, '07, 08:40

Nice song man
Maybe it's hatred I spew, maybe it's food for the spirit
Maybe it's beautiful music I made for you to just cherish
But I'm debated disputed hated and viewed in America
as a motherfuckin drug addict - like you didn't experiment?
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Blind » Jun 6th, '07, 09:19

Pistolpoppin wrote:Nice song man


Glad to see that :8) Thank you. I'm gonna record it within the next few days...
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Blind » Jun 7th, '07, 08:37

Does anybody can give a review to my shit????? :confusion:
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby IceAxe » Jun 7th, '07, 20:28

Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.

For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...

The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where I
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby shady4life! » Jun 7th, '07, 20:37

haha yeah! I never knew any real gangsta existed in Russia! :8) Nice song man i like it! yeah real nice. :smoking: But where can i get the recorded version of it so i can hear it and listen to the beat?
If u dont like the way i act then blow me, i ride with the real peeps who know me.
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Tash8 » Jun 7th, '07, 21:44

IceAxe wrote:Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.

For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...

The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where I
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Curtis » Jun 7th, '07, 21:46

Tash8 wrote:
IceAxe wrote:Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.

For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...

The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where I
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Tash8 » Jun 7th, '07, 23:03

^ tere's a difference of battles and creative writing...
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby shady4life! » Jun 8th, '07, 20:40

[quote="IceAxe"]Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.

For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...

The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where I
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Blind » Jun 18th, '07, 10:35

shady4life! wrote:Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where I
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby shady4life! » Jun 18th, '07, 17:46

Blind wrote:
shady4life! wrote:Ok, I'm gonna be real with you... I wasn't feeling this at all.For me, the rhymes are too simple to enjoy, ("goes", "ho", "flow") but that's just me. And I couldn't really find a good flow in this really...The Subject: You didn't really stick to it. When you said "Let me tell you about place where I
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Re: THE HOTTEST LYRICS

Postby Curtis » Jun 18th, '07, 17:47

Tash8 wrote:^ tere's a difference of battles and creative writing...

Hmm, not really
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