some new lyrics (added some more)

[stevethetruth]

i got more to this i just want to keep it underwraps

i hate it real bad when people expliot my flaws
they can't relate so they leave me no chioce of course
i gotta retailate with a blank slate state it's fate
never been fake(no) i've been respectful and so great-
ful for the ones helping me through ruff times
thanks for all the help i feel i don't say it enough sometimes
thanks for all the feed when my shit sucked bad
i've improved so much, thanks, yeah it's like that
i could never spit to a beat but now i can
i can stand on my own two feet and say i'm a man
not for the ability to spit but the ability not to quit
suddenly people will want every verse i've writ
with the fans i gain i will remain the same
with the fame i attain i will never change

[Tash8]

NICE loved it pure fire

[stevethetruth]

thanks aha means a lot man

[IceAxe]

Some good stuff here. It's got some nice content and rhymes.

Would make a good audio...keep it up

[stevethetruth]

Would make a good audio...keep it up

you'll see it on a track sometime don't worry haha

btw thanks alot for checking this out dude
thanks for the feedback

[stevethetruth]

added some more lines so um yeah BUMP!! haha

[Tash8]

i liked your first few lines more but still was good

[stevethetruth]

thanks man

[Rae]

just like i told you lastnite when u showed it to me.
great shit hunn!!

you gotta audio it when u finish it!!!