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Postby Aft3rmath » Jun 23rd, '07, 03:43

Sorry gotta get this last one out...........

Time breaks ya jaw/
Slaps ya raw/
wears away what was there/
but now is gone/
ya cant live in fear, be strong/
Life is to short, live it long/
let ya heart grow, and beat on/
cause tomorrow brings a new way/
a new sun, a new life, and a new day/
Live every moment like it was ya last/
cause once its gone, theres no goin back.
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Re: Time

Postby sinemm » Jun 24th, '07, 16:12

well thats aint bad..just need something more..i mean umm how to say :unsure:
like sth's missin..dunno

yeah not bad tho ;)
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Postby Aft3rmath » Jun 24th, '07, 20:27

Thanks bro it takes time to improve...and im slowly gettn there.
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