Poem(Give me my life)

[Aft3rmath]

Brisk cool air flows through my hair/
the morning breeze brings the bees/
and all else that is kind and fair/

I wait upon this hill of hope/
waiting for you to show/
watching these trees sway back and forth/

I wait and wait but you never come/
you stole my heart cold/
threw it away like it was used up and done/

My chest now has a crack/
so deep it weeps/
I cry for it back/

I try and try, I lose sleep/
I want my life back/
but you wont give it to me/

[Rae]

aww that was good hunn.
sweet, simple, and straight to the point . lol
good imagery (cant spell)

[Aft3rmath]

Thanks

[shady_aftermathzz]

nice one again, keep writing

peace

[Flamez]

that was nice man i like it