About my ex girl.

[James R.]

Yeah this is just some shit I did after I listened to superman about my crazy ass ex-gf. I'm sure a lot of you may have been here before, you just cant get over them even though you'd like to strangle the shit out of them. Anyways, it aint a super strong comeback, but it's what I was feeling so the emotions there. Did it to the superman beat so it may seem kinda off.

Remember the dream you sold me to
Put your life on mute cuz you told me to
No we won

[4D]

As usual, showing off those dope songwriting skills man. Always easy reading and feeding your shit. It's not my favourite content, not really into all the love stuff, but I know from writing a few things like this, that it's definitely not fuckin easy to do. Especially when you are still keeping the lyrics tight with some basic but good multi's. Only thing I would advise is that when you have 4 or 6 lines in a row, ending with the same rhyme, you need to add some internal rhymes or add the rhyme to the start of a line to keep the flow slick. Other than that it's hard to find fault in your posts.

Keep posting man.

[James R.]

Thanks. That was just some shit I had to get off my chest and it's definitely not my strongest work, but I'm workin on a better comeback for you haha

[4D]

Lol, I look forward to it.

Hey Aftermath has witten a verse for ya, check it out.

[Tash8]

hahahahahahahaha

real nice shit, i love when people write this shit, i just hate when people write I love my gf, cause they'll regret...

anyways nothing to say, cuz real nice real real nice.. nice similes in there