little sucky rhyme of mine

[pawel]

Peoples is asking me who I be,
Always they want an answer way to quickly,
What I am is the king of efficiency,
Everything question will be answered from A to Z,
Last line and I told my name, that

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

haha....nice done man
...with ur name thing

[pawel]

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[Tash8]

no offense but that's terrible... now i'm gonna go into detail so dont get offended

flow isn't good, structure isn't good, rhymes are simple, no complexity, no good vocab, there's really nothing good to it, that name thing u did was OK anyone could really do that

no offense, but keep at it man read 4d's tutorial in rap battle section

[pawel]

no offense but that's terrible... now i'm gonna go into detail so dont get offended

flow isn't good, structure isn't good, rhymes are simple, no complexity, no good vocab, there's really nothing good to it, that name thing u did was OK anyone could really do that

no offense, but keep at it man read 4d's tutorial in rap battle section

I told ya I suck
but the problem is, I suck at this, never really did it before, and I wanted (yeah I'm telling it now) to get my name spelled in every first line, and have it in one big multy. but it sucks I knew that when I was posting haha

[pawel]

no offense but that's terrible... now i'm gonna go into detail so dont get offended

flow isn't good, structure isn't good, rhymes are simple, no complexity, no good vocab, there's really nothing good to it, that name thing u did was OK anyone could really do that

no offense, but keep at it man read 4d's tutorial in rap battle section

I told ya I suck
but the problem is, I suck at this, never really did it before, and I wanted (yeah I'm telling it now) to get my name spelled in every first line, and have it in one big multy. but it sucks I knew that when I was posting haha

[Tash8]

it's no problem man, just keep at it keep working we all start somewhere

[Curtis]

lmao, i just understood it.

[Flamez]

nice but sux lol