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Fuckin Up

Postby Enimee » Jul 12th, '07, 06:22

look you'll never know it but this dudes just another sad song
take it from his name enimee just another faggots son

he talks shit but really he neva sparked shit its just a farce which
has this bitch in a fix cause he cant walk it always like FUCK IT

but really this kids sad weak alone and pissed cause theres noone speakin in the phone
just him and the reciever speakin to his fuckin golden retriever

cause heh no one else will listen a broken hope with a heart thats missin
thats who the fuck im dissin the little bitch who keeps shit unwritten

ur hot? fuck well prove it then bitch u aint shit just face it u neva made shit
that hade anyone bumpin in the club thumpin u just fake shit ull neva make it

keeps the same tired rhymes laced in each line like its new but its just repeat time afta time
for a dude with a weak mind and no time to reach 9 neva worked a 9-5 neva dide half the time

so keep with ur lies u fake ass foe u aint shit well atleast thats what you show
so remember this next time you call yourself the best kid ull never best shit

u shud have your chest split cause the time u claim u invested was nuffin zip zero
u aint no fit hero just gonna quit soon nearer too queer always quakin with fear

ur sturcture is ass and ur multis to shit why when u spit u always claim u da shit?
when lyrically u've been surpassed outclassed and straight put to shame u fit

in a better picture more like u sit on dudes laps u as wack as the past and past
bein wack the fact is you lact the insinuous smack that sting of tha knack

for packin tha heat not shootin i mean skill that keeps us aimin for knees
so quit bitch please stop rappin cause all u is is pain to my ears
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Re: Fuckin Up

Postby Tash8 » Jul 12th, '07, 06:55

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Re: Fuckin Up

Postby Rae » Jul 30th, '07, 02:32

i kno this a old topic but im glad to see u writing again.
idk whatcha really tryin to say but then again i never have been able to understand you have i ? lol

good job.
keep tha writing up.

im glad to see you have "time" for it.
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