just rhymin...

[Flamez]

since i'm out here in L.A. wanted to write sumthing..


it's the sickest realest illest lyricist who got game
the slickest idealist turbulent twisted emcee flamez
i'm a deadly murderous verbal killer with perfect aim
just remember my name before i blow out your useless brain
i'm like a ruthless insane tyrant causing agonizing pain
these words are like acid that i make go inside your veins
yea its an unexplained mystery but your life's history
with a criminal mastermind plan its an unsolved mystery
you'll be like shaggy scooby and the gang tryin to solve me
but nothin' can resolve me can't you see i'm on a lyrical spree
i'm untouchable you can't handle me i'm too hot for you to handle
i'm makin' a scandal i'm a man on fire burning like a candle


feedback appreciated

[C-Game]

i have to hand it to u
u have used big words with the meanin in tact
but da flow doesnt seem right
if u can link a couple of rhymes to gether ( multi ) it would have been a better compilation


p.s on another note..
i have been here on tr for some time and all u mofos have stepped ur game up big time

[Flamez]

well thanx C-Game.. yea i haven't really used multi's