Wordplay Practice

[Tash8]

I think this forum needs practice, atleast I think so, cause i need it too

so yea let's get it started:

for those who don't know what wordplay is:

This has to be the best part of writing a verse. Wordplays are puns. Or words that have double meaning used to conjoin different concepts together, while making sense out of it. It's just basically that: Play on words, Playing with words.

these are 2 i just made up

1] Color your mind with so much rhymes your face turns blue

and this one only works if your a girl i guess

2] I love my sex cause I can do it more than once

[J Roc]

#2 dont make sence 2 me

eminems a rapper cuz he'll wrap presents
jus like a no show that dont lack presence

i think i did it rite

[Tash8]

umm

the second one

I love my sex cause I can do it more than once

I love my sex --> a girl
can do it more than once --> girl sex..


get it?

[J Roc]

oh im gettin it,she can fuk guys an girls more then once

next one

i lost my money so now im shocked
with jolts of static in my body locked

2 more golden rymes

[4D]

Hey sisters, I`m like a scissors when I cut this thread
To Christ I`m Anti like the wife of your Uncle Fred

Two puns: Anti/auntie, Thread: Topic/string

Tash, your first one was a metaphor, not a pun, very nice metaphor though. Unless i`m missing the pun, dunno.

[Tash8]

wordplays don't necessarily have to be puns ..

and nice

[4D]

wordplays don't necessarily have to be puns ..

and nice

I know, but we already have a topic for metaphors

And thanks!


I hear pleas about guns 'n ammo, and I respond with Tanks,
Groom the scruff off the 'tache and spray blondes with blanks.


Puns:
PLeas = speeches/please
Tanks = weaponry and thanks.
Tache = moustache and Tash, grooming the hair, improving Tash.

[nuke]

Learkin the dark alleys while im Jerkin the Gerkin

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i aint great at it, been praccticicng more and mroe though

(from im a fighter)

When i step up w/rappers flee like im a bin man,
look there's not a w/rapper to see, rap, you'll never be that.

Step up (step up as in steppin up a level and also as in a bin man steping up to collects the bins)

Wrappers/Rappers

simple stuff lol

(from a unreleased ft)

i was gonni be a shop asisitant just swiping your goods nothing that perisitant


Swiping - swiping as in stealing and swiping as in swiping them at a check out

(let it rain)

now find me in a gutter in 10 years time a dead beat rapper

dead beat rapper - dead beat as in a down and out - dead beat as in on dead beats


cant think of anymore, i got to work on it alot though