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Freekey Love

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Freekey Love

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 23rd, '07, 00:49

it could happen tomorrow
I hope it never comes
1 day I'll be sorry
4 everything I've ever done
it feels like I have 2 rhyme
I know I've got tha heart 2 make it
can't let tha outside interfere
u won't see me start ta fake this
impossible is a defense mechinism
u need 2 learn 2 guard ya basics
tha man in my mirrors sucessfull
but then again his partners wasted
my demographic is partying it up
guess what no1's forcing tha youth
they just feed us their lies
occansionally with portions of truth
nothings changed we'll all end up dying
so what role does tha cash play
u still can't take it with u
but u have 2 have it 2 yur last day
everything 2 them is politics
they're not worried about tha other fights
they don't deal with tha struggles
it's like they live another life
groups recap tha quarters
focusing on what they're doin wrong
if thats still tha case right now
then how are we moving on
there are so many potential dangers
I won't dispute yur pick
it seems all our time is borrowed
I see it clear, that's what tha future is
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Re: Freekey Love

Postby Tash8 » Jul 23rd, '07, 00:52

nice shit yet again rain, keep at it i'm liking this style, though i'm not liking the strcture

make the lines longer.
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Re: Freekey Love

Postby CaptivatingVokalz » Jul 23rd, '07, 02:31

i like this a lot!! i was a little confused in the beginning at who you were taking a jab at but "i see it clear" now :) <---- ok the way i just said that line was so gay lol
*~Vokally Blessed Kristen~*
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Re: Freekey Love

Postby Flamez » Jul 23rd, '07, 04:48

nice rain pretty good shit :y:
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