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Postby Marth » Jul 25th, '07, 09:16

how to say
your my star in the space
my car in the race
that's to to far to be hated
how to say
you're the last stone of a mountain
i love you so much i can't count it
how to say
you're the fundation, the ground under my feet
that without you, i fall into the deep,
and I crawl like some beasts
hwo to say
you're my drip in the rain
that's hitting the grain
like a bitch hitting gays
how to say you're my leave, on the tree, that i need
to breath
how to say you're my arrow, i need to survive
that i'm without you, like jack sparrow, that needs to return to his life
how to say, you're the lowest stone on a building
giving me the support, i can't stop thinking
how to say, i love you more then I love my life
if you cry, i start thinkin why, if you die
i can't survive
how to say... you're the paint on a painting
for me you're the anger of a prisoner start raging
you're my life....


( chorus........ )

that you're the sound of my voice
how to say i dont'obey the law but your choice
that i crawl of the noise
of you crying....

verse2
you're the part in my life that's supposed to stay forever
me and you, are supposed to stay together
whatever, you're the elpihant of the show for me
i already said it once, you're the ellgant
girl i give you what i can and want
how to say, you're the box of my instilation
that you're my source of inpsiration
that you're the creep of the horror
the voice saying, i love her
you're the watter of the sea
that you're the motto that i see


you're the picture of the scene
the depiction of a queen
the fiction of my breath

how to say, i can't describe the love i feel for you
imma confined in a room full of hatred as i grieve of u
gimme da key and open the door to ur heart
coz ur da source of my life without u its tearin me apart




u guys got any tips before i record it???
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Re: How to say...

Postby Marth » Aug 18th, '07, 19:56

can i get feed? please
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Re: How to say...

Postby C-Game » Aug 19th, '07, 19:30

i heard ur stuff on da mic .. and da second one u did flowed well

practice a lil and let me hear it on tape..

ill read da lyrics 2mo .... :y:
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