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Almighty

Postby Tash8 » Jul 30th, '07, 08:25

I don’t know what the fuck you ‘meant’, write it on a document
cause you left your ‘fresh breathe’ in another continent
leave you in a ‘monument’ cause you been murked by a famous ‘architect’
eating up mainstream rappers like my anus is barking shit
killin' who ‘nark’ and hit, come up behind you like spider 'spy' with a catchin mit
i grasp you and leave you in 'gravel' like a dinosaur
have you screamin harsher than a mighty lion 'roar', then ask you whatchu fighting for?
cause in a sec you'll be more red than a cherry icy cone

i couldn't get in the mood to finish this, so yea whatever.

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Re: Almighty

Postby Flamez » Aug 1st, '07, 02:02

well as i told ya it's nice
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Re: Almighty

Postby CaptivatingVokalz » Aug 1st, '07, 22:46

Nice word-stock :y: You went off topic... I couldn't really grasp what you were trying to convey :confusion: ...seems like more of a freestyle type of writing... but still good... :)
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Re: Almighty

Postby Tash8 » Aug 1st, '07, 22:46

CaptivatingVokalz wrote:Nice word-stock :y: You went off topic... I couldn't really grasp what you were trying to convey :confusion: ...seems like more of a freestyle type of writing... but still good... :)


oh i was just practicing punchlines, cause people on other places kept saying you got no punches
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