pulled myself up

[Ka0t1c]

ive pulled myself up from the bottom
and expelled my old problems
and now im showin all doubtin
im still on the mountain
tryna get over
but each routes been violently cornered
so im shoutin as fighting goes forward

by accellin i found that i am a soldier
and no boundaries can hold me
counting closer im growing
to a crowd who should know me
allow me to open my orders and report em

my story as a warrior before im destroyed
give me glory... or are you for horror?

i dont enjoy feeling tortured
plus paranoid cuz of mortars
but i cant avoid whats important
understand i joined in the portrait
and i planned my voice wouldnt shorten
so i have many choices assorted
while my handed voyage is boarded
where i am pointed towards the poison
then i'll stand rewarded in war with
good points well supported before im exported
but until then, on the stand im reportin thru performin

[James R.]

Very poetic man. The flow was kinda iffy, but I think I was just having a hard time catching it. I did like it though. Had some nice concepts in there which is always good to read. Keep it comin

[baller4life]

Good job.

[Requiem]

Pulled myself up off the women,
if i was a car, they'd be driven
Keep 'em hungry, like a famine,
wantin to go fishin for salmon,
but i won't give in,
to these feminine,
sweet and sour lemons,
they demons deep within,
trying to suck me in,
give a spin on they chin,
play 'em like a violin,
both of 'em wanna begin,
but damn, i could'a sworn ur mama had a twin.

[baller4life]

Pulled myself up off the women,
if i was a car, they'd be driven
Keep 'em hungry, like a famine,
wantin to go fishin for salmon,
but i won't give in,
to these feminine,
sweet and sour lemons,
they demons deep within,
trying to suck me in,
give a spin on they chin,
play 'em like a violin,
both of 'em wanna begin,
but damn, i could'a sworn ur mama had a twin.

Pretty good.