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sudden death

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 14th, '07, 07:14

Threats could end up in sudden death
From buttons pressed
Now nothing's left puffin breaths

Thought you were tough I guess
Until the last shot which blasted
Caught your flesh fast in just a flash

You must have messed up your past
Because I watched ya crash

Yeah your body's cashed: dust n ash
You cussed, collapsed n busted
Next I trust you'll rest with other pests...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: sudden death

Postby Nu Syd » Aug 14th, '07, 11:14

deep,nice read
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