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its gone..:p

Postby Flamez » Aug 28th, '07, 20:57

*poof* gone..
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Re: Fuck you haterz...

Postby Flamez » Aug 29th, '07, 07:10

so bitches u think this sucked..
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Re: Fuck you haterz...

Postby J Roc » Aug 29th, '07, 08:04

liked tha beginin an middle,but wasent feelin tha endin very much..probly cause im a little unconcious(i think thats tha word) about whats happenin right now :unsure:
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Re: Fuck you haterz...

Postby Flamez » Aug 29th, '07, 08:49

well thanx for the feed..
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Re: Fuck you haterz...

Postby Greece Lightning » Aug 29th, '07, 10:30

i like it
BUY CURTIS! Dont Buy kanye :@
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Re: Fuck you haterz...

Postby Flamez » Aug 29th, '07, 17:30

thanx glad u did :y:
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Re: Fuck you haterz...

Postby shady4life! » Sep 2nd, '07, 18:24

it was okay tho...thats all i can say...somethin is missin about it i really dont know... oh ah yes i think its cuz u didnt giv enough punches... too many simalies and metaphors, not enough direct insults dont know exactly who ur talkin about tho, if u r talkin about haters u shud at least use the word "haters" once in ur song or like show that u r talkin about them some how, but u didnt... i mean u cud be talkin about ur best friend that u got in a fight with for fucks sake. But i like the multis tho they were pretty good and thats about it :y:
If u dont like the way i act then blow me, i ride with the real peeps who know me.
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Re: Fuck you haterz...

Postby Kojack » Sep 3rd, '07, 19:13

FUCK ME! R U HOMO?
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Re: Fuck you haterz...

Postby shady4life! » Sep 3rd, '07, 23:15

Kojack wrote:FUCK ME! R U HOMO?

:confusion: wat...was that meant to be funny :unsure:
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Re: Fuck you haterz...

Postby Kojack » Sep 4th, '07, 01:03

shady4life! wrote:
Kojack wrote:FUCK ME! R U HOMO?

:confusion: wat...was that meant to be funny :unsure:


No i forgot why i said it :confusion:
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Re: its gone..:p

Postby Flamez » Sep 4th, '07, 08:02

uh..ok well thanx for the feed..
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