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[Steve Spag]

All I need is my weed and my pen and my pad//
Any old emotion gets put to the past//
Temporarily I'll feel a little bit sane//
Until my buzz goes away and I'm back to being crazed//
I'm labelled a "cracker", "just another white rapper"//
"He's spitting out these lines, but he keeps getting wacker"//
"His flow is way off and his voice is too soft"//
Man, shut the fuck up, this is MY song//
That I'll spit to the kids, these teens and adults//
I got a large fanbase, you can judge the results//
The man of the time, a lyricist with heart//
Never did well in school, but still knowledgable and sharp//
I'm quick with the wit just like I'm swift with my hits//
They all come out smoothly, all you haters kiss my dick//
I'm the hottest around, feet will never touch the ground//
I'ma leave you like Em, here comes the touchdown//

Just a random ass verse I just thought of....let me know what you think.

[Restlesswon]

good read man

[Steve Spag]

Thanks a lot man. Any more feed anyone?

[shady4life!]

it was okay but it did not all rhyme tho, eg. pad, past, sane crazed (not really) soft, song sharp, heart, (well yeah a lil) hits, dick (nnnope)

and since u got just a few multis, well, i wudnt really rate the song highly to be honest. When u got rhymes that dont actually rhyme then thats when its best to use multis, but if the words rhyme perfectly then they can easily pass and go. But i like the last two lines tho