Rap...

[Steve Spag]

It seems I’m loosing my mind, ever since I’ve started rap//
I’ve gone a little crazy ckoo-ckoo, I always watch my back//
I got a target on it steady, somebody’s got a gat//
Someone with a grudge against me just because I make my tracks//
Their finger’s getting ready, the hammer’s held back//
That trigger finger’s deadly, and I don’t wanna face that//
I’m still a little young, a man not yet fulfilled//
But I’ll prove I’d die for music, my own blood will be spilled//
You see I’m married to this bitch, I’m stuck with it for life//
Until the day I die, spitting lyrics every night//
The thing that keeps me sane, push depression to the side//
Puts aggression to a high, my obsession will not die//
I’m a dedicated husband stuck with this whoreish wife//
Fucking with these shitty rappers, welcome to my life//
Steve Spag is the name, I’m headed to the top//
You motherfuckers must drop ‘cause with me there is no stop//
And I’m Gone!//

Wrote without a beat for once. I pictured a type of Ricky Ticky Tock kind of sounding thing. The flow switches at the 7th bar. Let me know what you think,

[TRshady]

Really liked it, clevery written and kept my attention throughout which doesn't happen often.

[Nu Syd]

good read

[Steve Spag]

Thanks a lot, I appreciate it. Anyone else got some feedback?

[Ka0t1c]

it's decent, but def. not a keeper, when i read it this threw me off: "

Until the die I day, spitting lyrics every night"

but i know what you mean, anyways, stay workin on it just like the rest of us

[Steve Spag]

it's decent, but def. not a keeper, when i read it this threw me off: "

Until the die I day, spitting lyrics every night"

but i know what you mean, anyways, stay workin on it just like the rest of us

LMAO, I had no idea I worded it like that. Obviously I mean Until the day I die. Well I feel embarassed, lmao.