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Eyes Dispair

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Eyes Dispair

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 6th, '07, 05:50

I'm a missing man, my wish in hand, as I'm lifting sand, from our glass no one saw me leave
by my secret door, all be it for, a speechless force, that reach's more, as it breach's forth possibly

into oblivion, so live free son, noted he comes, through his passage way, avoiding a tragic day
barely, a higher power spares me, it's scary, but necessary, it'll get ya care free in a massive way

seeing hells flames, spells change, from tha sky fell rain, I had wondered where tha hate went
I wasn't stationed, I was still heading for tha pavement, growing closer, testing my patience

then three dimensions splattered, a tension shattered, I told myself ya went in battered
now broken, seemingly outspoken, tha shy type, it's my life, what gets mentioned after

so much smoke and mirrors, most plans veer off course, into a lost source, never fake tha end
too early, u hurled me, into worldy, so I came back, from my slain past, trying to make amends

looking to compromise, on ya guys drama size, wanna try, if not then u need to stay to your own
like clockwork I'm chronological, on tha drop it's so, gone ya got this close, but tha wars grown

I'll disappear, this tha fear, thats tha kind of thinking that gets ya here, surronded by ya four walls
becoming a man that proudly dies under cloudy skies, cuz he doubts he's wise, then tha floor falls

knowing your going with no wings, u put your indiscretions in tha open, feeling like passions slave
u see love, your thoughts freeze up, they cease stuck, returning to tha earth like a crashing wave

your personal movie, a certain show moves me, hurting those truly, who know what u left behind
it was set ta be your legacy, it was grim some weeks, but incomplete, if only I could press rewind
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Re: Eyes Dispair

Postby CaptivatingVokalz » Sep 6th, '07, 07:40

WOW~ you are truly gifted in writing...what a poetic piece of art! You have a unconventional way of writing poetry and that is a BIG PLUS in originality. :y:

Love the way you portray the message :worship:
*~Vokally Blessed Kristen~*
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Re: Eyes Dispair

Postby Kojack » Sep 6th, '07, 10:58

CaptivatingVokalz wrote:WOW~ you are truly gifted in writing...what a poetic piece of art! You have a unconventional way of writing poetry and that is a BIG PLUS in originality. :y:

Love the way you portray the message :worship:


He aint gifted, he just writing rhymes, hoping they mean something.
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Re: Eyes Dispair

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 6th, '07, 17:46

my heart is writing rhymes, that always means something...
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Re: Eyes Dispair

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 6th, '07, 19:33

your personal movie, a certain show moves me, hurting those truly


i like how that rhymes, "Poet"
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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