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Drunken key child molesters..haha.First drop

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Drunken key child molesters..haha.First drop

Postby blarc » Sep 14th, '07, 23:54

I’m the top artist, under none.
A rock star who drops bars and likes his women on E, like the number one.
Bitches call me "Mack Dad". Riches? I stack that chippage...
And battles? You know I rack wins like Baghdad wishes,
ya rag-tag cliques isn’t half that vicious...
fuckin with text songs? I’m past that business,
now I attack wack dimwits and fag cats in with their rat pack image who act that vintage.
I amass adjectives en masse.
Advocates of math averages have to listen twice in class just to catch half the gist.
Grabbing graphs, abacuses, pads, and mad packs of Scripto blacks to practice with...
like sad sacks of shit.
Just spit, put a mic in your hand...
who gives a shit if it gets slept on like a flight to Japan...
the shit i write’s as hard as life to an ant,
the type you’d like to write too but cant’ because you have the life view of Stan,
when my life’s through my likeness will go right to a stamp, like Ike, Hoover, Grant.
I’m the Mic Superman, with the brand new light blue tight suit and pants.
I’m like a bad smell at a rap show trying to fight through the fans...
In a class well above pass/fail and such...
Act twelve and up, rap well, and shucks, you’ll be Maxwell in months,
selling bunches of tracks, back on the Paxil one hundred caps, feelin drugged!
Now, is that swell, or what??
Sick with the flow, cats don’t have a fifth of the vocab in my quotes and think my note pad’s encrypted in codes.
Got the gift and it shows,
blasting diction like ignitions when a piston explodes
after you’ve driven half the distance the globe’s axis is
and the ribbons that hold it attached snap, rip, and erode...
rap symphony molder, a soldier enrolled in rap’s infantry,
throwing boulders at cats with a shoulder and back injury,
I over-react when exposed to your wack similies over these tracks
that sound like those most of the rap industry facsimilies composed over the last half century...
but phony, it‘s only an act.....
yo, relax, I’m still and inch from relapsing...
I’m like a strap that eventually snaps,
an energy packed cat with a bad temper that vengefully acts,
with mental recaps and flashbacks to fill the gaps that my memory lacks...
Your loss of respect’s a cause and effect course of events,
It’s like you cats altered your prints... like withdrawal, a defense,
you falsely pretend to be someone you’re not...
all for the friends?
for the awfully dense kids offering hints
like crime solvers and law firms involved in Vince Foster‘s defense?
How old are we? Ten?...
I can’t just say “You SUCK!“,
It’d be too awkwardly tense and disorderly, hence,
your feeble sense of self-respect can’t afford to be sensed...
here’s where your career cordially ends, and normalcy for immortal forms recommences...
till then be sure to record every sentence I form orally or even pen-printed...
or be defenseless.
Your miniature brain will only deminish your rank in this,
inhibit your language and opinions, and straight limit your strengths, bitches...
I reign I’m the official lame finisher
while you clean the pane on my framed signature... shit hasn’t changed, I came in a jerk.
It’s my claim to fame,
I’m a sinister saint in a church preying on lame laymen whose main sin is birth.
A paid minister who administers pain and shame in a verse.
A shaman with words.
My brain rains integers when dangerous agents lurk like when a glitch in the Matrix occurs.
Its circuitry is more ancient than dirt but works better than modern data chips like nature reversed...
Now, blaze, introvert... and rub these faggots faces in dirt...
hahah.. :worship: no HTML huh
blarc
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Re: Drunken key child molesters..haha.First drop

Postby chad08 » Sep 15th, '07, 00:03

tooo long to read
two black gun i dont know, maybe there magnums, i dont know what the fuck there called i just grab them
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Re: Drunken key child molesters..haha.First drop

Postby 4D » Sep 15th, '07, 12:00

That's fuckin dope man, structure doesn't matter in text when there's a flow and rhythm to the rhyming words. I`m very impressed, ya had a lot of nice wordplay, great vocab and some very good multi's. Keep it up, and welcome to the forum. :y:
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Re: Drunken key child molesters..haha.First drop

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 15th, '07, 14:59

for every glitch theres a spliff :y:
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Re: Drunken key child molesters..haha.First drop

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 21st, '07, 23:23

good shit there, i like it, keep doing you
that is great writing, makes me want to write that much again...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Drunken key child molesters..haha.First drop

Postby 4D » Sep 24th, '07, 20:59

Kaotic wrote:good shit there, i like it, keep doing you
that is great writing, makes me want to write that much again...



Like wise, after reading this I actually started writing instantly, remembering when it was fun and free.
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Re: Drunken key child molesters..haha.First drop

Postby Arabian Shady » Oct 2nd, '07, 16:33

pretty neat, awesoem infact
keep it up
peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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