some stuff for a track in progress

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

see im lyrically mastered liqour got me plastered
quicker than a fast word so a snicker at you bastard
that im blasting i be casting you you frozen in fear
icicle as your tear a see you when you near
shittin out your rear start quitin your a queer
like the eye for a straight guy
my lyrics so hot they be turning a straight bi
my mind is set like the state of ny
n that wont ever be a changing like never re a ranging
so no exchanging your money for passion
not even as the last action or for a mass fraction
thats not an atraction that im atracted to
people extracting my flow they just disctracted you


just thought id post for feed

im defiantly getting back upto standard ( i think anywae)


oh yeah by the way dunno if anyone would get this but in the last line

disstracted - diss track ted

i liked that since i dont do stuf flike that much lol, and i know it aint a real word so to speak but you wall know what i mean like he got slapped, he got diss tracked

[Ethos]

Hm... i'm liking the flow. but For true criticism we're gonna have to hear ya actually rap it. I'm liking the multis though.

[SajN]

I am liking the flow too

But I am so stupid that I don't know what multies are.. cuz I am not good in english.. I would appreciate if someone gave me a good example..

see im lyrically mastered liqour got me plastered
quicker than a fast word so a snicker at you bastard

This made me think of Em's Criminal..

I drink malt liquor to fuck you up quicker

:P:P

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I am liking the flow too

But I am so stupid that I don't know what multies are.. cuz I am not good in english.. I would appreciate if someone gave me a good example..

see im lyrically mastered liqour got me plastered
quicker than a fast word so a snicker at you bastard

This made me think of Em's Criminal..

I drink malt liquor to fuck you up quicker

:P:P

its in no way me bititng or anything, its just using the same rhymes everythign else is different lol

and multi's are


see im lyrically mastered liqour got me plastered
quicker than a fast word so a snicker at you bastards

lyrically mastered, rhymes with, liqour got me plastered, that also rhymes with, quicker than a fast word, and also rhymes with , snicker at you bastards.

the all have the same amount of sylybles and they all rhyme.

multis are rhyming sylybles and not just words, how i broke up lyrically mastred and rhymed it with 4 words by breaking up the sylybles.

but if you aint good at english you probably wont udnerstand what i mean

thx for the feed though


that im blasting i be casting you you frozen in fear
icicle as your tear a see you when you near
shittin out your rear start quitin your a queer

[SajN]

I am liking the flow too

But I am so stupid that I don't know what multies are.. cuz I am not good in english.. I would appreciate if someone gave me a good example..

see im lyrically mastered liqour got me plastered
quicker than a fast word so a snicker at you bastard

This made me think of Em's Criminal..

I drink malt liquor to fuck you up quicker

:P:P

its in no way me bititng or anything, its just using the same rhymes everythign else is different lol

and multi's are


see im lyrically mastered liqour got me plastered
quicker than a fast word so a snicker at you bastards

lyrically mastered, rhymes with, liqour got me plastered, that also rhymes with, quicker than a fast word, and also rhymes with , snicker at you bastards.

the all have the same amount of sylybles and they all rhyme.

multis are rhyming sylybles and not just words, how i broke up lyrically mastred and rhymed it with 4 words by breaking up the sylybles.

but if you aint good at english you probably wont udnerstand what i mean

thx for the feed though


that im blasting i be casting you you frozen in fear
icicle as your tear a see you when you near
shittin out your rear start quitin your a queer

I knew you wasn't copying Em .. I just said that ..

I understand what you're saying. I actually had that in my mind, but I wasn't sure.
So thanks for telling me.

And once again: Great songtext again