Delicately Droppin Fridges (Just some practice)

[4D]

AAghhh, fuck this monotony of readin wack and rotten posts,
Damn, I`m so bored-stiff of feeding back and dropping votes,
I do give props to most but stoppin those with zero potential,
More wannabees and cons than a comic con hero convention,
I've no halo collection 'n' I`m no saint, definitely not religious,
But to cool drops, I`m a true God, delicately droppin fridges,
I`m crossin bridges like the cross of Brigid's complex weaving
Worldwide my worthwhile wordstyle got bitches of text leaving
Every witness perplexed reading just disbelieves the cleverness,
"Must take him forever" but for me it's simple-ease 'n effortless,
Simple as pimple-sqeezin yella-heads with thumb and forefinger,
In battles no-one scores-bigger than 4D the summoned war-bringer!


As I said in the title, just some practice to get back posting in this section, just spent a few minutes on this one, let me know what ya think. Don't heed the content of the first few lines, no hate intended was just something to start it off.

[HAYZI]

AAghhh, fuck this monotony of readin wack and rotten posts,
Damn, I`m so bored-stiff of feeding back and dropping votes,
I do give props to most but stoppin those with zero potential,
More wannabees and cons than a comic con hero convention,
I've no halo collection 'n' I`m no saint, definitely not religious,
But to cool drops, I`m a true God, delicately droppin fridges,
I`m crossin bridges like the cross of Brigid's complex weaving
Worldwide my worthwhile wordstyle got bitches of text leaving
Every witness perplexed reading just disbelieves the cleverness,
"Must take him forever" but for me it's simple-ease 'n effortless,
Simple as pimple-sqeezin yella-heads with thumb and forefinger,
In battles no-one scores-bigger than 4D the summoned war-bringer!


As I said in the title, just some practice to get back posting in this section, just spent a few minutes on this one, let me know what ya think. Don't heed the content of the first few lines, no hate intended was just something to start it off.

sickness as always

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

agree just sick 4D

[J Roc]

ya vocab is nice 4D it kinda makes errybody else look stupid... nice drop man

[4D]

Hehe thanks for the nice feedback people, i've been meaning to get back posting in this section lately, this is hopefully the start of a lot of posts. I wrote about 10 lines yesterday, got frustrated and just abandoned them, to be honest too, they were pretty good, I just wasn't arsed to finish them.

[-[Zach]-]

Worldwide my worthwhile wordstyle got bitches of text leaving
Every witness perplexed reading just disbelieves the cleverness,
"Must take him forever" but for me it's simple-ease 'n effortless,
Simple as pimple-sqeezin yella-heads with thumb and forefinger,
In battles no-one scores-bigger than 4D the summoned war-bringer!

those are my favorite lines. the whole thing is hot though. and nice vocab like J roc said.

[JMG]

damn that was good as hell

[4D]

Thanks people, glad ye like it.

[Rain Matrix]

a really nice drop, yur rhymes stood out from most of ours

practice is a beautiful thing

[4D]

Thanks Rain, I appreciate that.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

as always sick stuff

ghost write for me ? lol

[SajN]

Wow that was sick!

I loved those first lines!

[4D]

Thanks Bar and Non-Stop, all you guys givin me this positive feedback is givin me the itch to drop daily.

[C-Game]

kool stuff buddy

cross of Brigid's <-- i donno wat dat means though..some kinda film / book ??

anyway sick stuff as usual..

[4D]

Use Wiki man, St. Brigids Cross, she was a patron saint in Ireland.

EDit:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brigid%27s_cross