The Return.

[Steve Spag]

Wrote it to a beat so you may not get the specific flow for the "questions" lines...

I'm going crazy, I'm just lost in my thoughts//
I know I'm acting like a baby and I'm locked behind these bars//
I'm lazy lately, I don't know what's going on//
The meaning of my songs tell you I've been doing wrong//
It's like I ain't thinking straight, my brain has been derailed//
Every task in this life, I'm at a constant pace to fail//
It's retarded what I think, even doctor's don't know//
What the fuck to say to me when I walk in through the door//
And when I sit into chair, they're always pounding me with questions//
Every word that I say just gets questioned//
You don't know me or exactly how I feel//
All you know is that I rap and that I wanna get a deal//
Not the man beneath the surface 'cause I'm too complex to know//
Every thing that I think and that I feel is out control//
The way I feel is real 'cause I would never spit a lie//
What you got inside your chest? 'Cause there is no heart in mine//

Steve Spag

[Steve Spag]

Any feedback?

[Tash8]

well i dont have enough time to feed it, but the way you rap on audio, if you improve your lyrics you could be a great rapper soon, but i mean, make your lyrics more complicated, try new rhyming schemes, not the same 1/4th bar rhyme thing, and try to add multis and shit... and maybe metas and wordplays.

[SajN]

Good Job

Sorry, but I haven't seen other songs from you (I'm sure you have written here before, but I haven't noticed), so therefore I can't say so much of what you should change..

But this one was good!

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed, much appreciated.