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More Lyrics. My Best Yet IMO.

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 11th, '07, 17:58

Wrote to a beat again, haha. Don't worry, I'll switch my topics soon enough, just had to get this off my chest, lol.

People just don't understand how unstable I am//
It's like they label me a fable, I'm depressed, don't give a damn//
About anyone around me anymore they're all fake//
Fuck my friends, fuck my family, fuck my fans, I'm 'bout to break//
I heard I spit about depression 'cause this rap has took control//
It's like no one noticed before, no shit, this is my soul//
I kept it bottled in inside for such a very long time//
And what's bothering my mind is that my friends have crossed the line//
They're saying that I'm fake and that I'm hurting 'cause I rap//
I ain't about to drop names, there's a problem within that//
But I gotta let you know that these feelings that I face//
Are coming from relationship's I feel I'm out of place//
I'm surrounded by this shit, look around me, it's my life//
Nothing positive around except my lyrics and this mic.//
But I gotta set it right if it's the last thing that I do//
And what you'll read upon my tomb is that I'm haunting pretty soon//

Yeah, didn't really know what to do with the last line, lol.

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Re: More Lyrics. My Best Yet IMO.

Postby -[Zach]- » Oct 11th, '07, 18:54

i liked it. a lot of emotion in it. nice job. :y:
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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