Trapped

[Steve Spag]

And another one....lol. Didn't write this to a beat. Actually just turned on Prison Break one night and sat and wrote, lol. Kinda weird, but I like it.

It's like I'm trapped within the walls, I feel so alone//
Sure, people are surrounding me, but this isn't home//
It's not the feeling's that I've had, it's something never seen//
A dream not meant to be, another tragic tragedy//
My brain my only friend, and a shitty one at that//
He covers me with weakness, I express it in my rap//
The way I feel is real 'cause I would never spit a lie//
What you got under your chest? 'Cause there is no heart in mine//
A broken man indeed though my exterior might not show//
I got a reputation to maintain and take control//
Handled with percision I will take what's rightfully mine//
I will smite thee with my rhymes, I am Pure, I cure the blind//
A legendary figure, my time is soon to come//
And when I get my opportunity, you know I'm gonna run//
Gotta make it to the finish, and make my friends proud//
Make everyone around me yell and scream all out so loud//
I gotta make it for myself, it's the reason that I'm Steve//
This hard working man that's located inside me//
And though I don't show it, I really mean well//
How could I be alive? I am walking through hell//

[Link665]

good lyrics maybe lincoln burrows said in the 1 season when he was on the way to the chair.Its a depressed song it fits prisoners,but not prisoners like scofield.

[James R.]

It's not bad. The rhymes are simplistic but effective. There was a bit of redundancy with the one line where you said "tragic tragedy" I mean obviously a tragedy is tragic lol. Try to eliminate some of the less necessary words. It'll make your flow tighter and it'll leave you more room to talk about your topic.

[Steve Spag]

good lyrics maybe lincoln burrows said in the 1 season when he was on the way to the chair.Its a depressed song it fits prisoners,but not prisoners like scofield.

Thanks much, but yeah I didn't really aim it to Prison Break. Just realted it to myself as I was watching it, lol.

It's not bad. The rhymes are simplistic but effective. There was a bit of redundancy with the one line where you said "tragic tragedy" I mean obviously a tragedy is tragic lol. Try to eliminate some of the less necessary words. It'll make your flow tighter and it'll leave you more room to talk about your topic.

I get what you're saying, lol. Thanks much.