Homecoming

[Tash8]

last night was "homecoming",
I had to skip it because I accidently ate my own stomache
i'm just kidding, I skipped it cause I was feelin' lonely
my own fucking teddy bear wouldn't even hold me,
*ring ring* then someone decided to call me
turns out, my aunt had just won fourty four g's.
hung up on that bitch, cause she made me feel grunted
cuz she's going to buy that flavor condom that i wanted
but then later, mama came to give me a heartfelt hug
but she said "oops sorry i had mistaken you for the electric plug"
oh well fuck it, i decided to get my porn running
so in the end i guess i did get my "home cumming"

something i wrote in 10 min, i can't believe i was able to write it lol..

please feed..

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

hell yea..... enjoy this funny shit
nice job man... ryhming is nice and flow is fine wit me lol

maybe u could add one more ryhme to the "fourty four g's"-part

other than that i liked it... enjoyable

[Tash8]

hell yea..... enjoy this funny shit
nice job man... ryhming is nice and flow is fine wit me lol

maybe u could add one more ryhme to the "fourty four g's"-part

other than that i liked it... enjoyable

haha thanks and four g's rhymes with call/hold me

[Tash8]

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[C-Game]

last two lines was kool man.. put a smile on me..

good stuff

and da reason for xris to say dat "fourty four G"s go at one flow..

even though the syllables matched (11 each ) it felt a lil off for a reader..

other dan dat decent and funny

[Enimee]

FUUUUUUUUUUUUNY hot sticky wet hahahaha

[Arabian Shady]

last 2 lines were awesome!! i actually laughed out loud!
nice 1

peace

P.S- could u review my post as well? thnx man