The Real Jigsaw

[Steve Spag]

Weird verse I came up with not too long ago. Didn't write to a beat but there's a certain flow to it to make it sound proper. I guess you'll just have to find it, lol. Not really my type of lyrics, but wanted to try something new. Variety is key as you already know, lol.

I'm like a ghost in your house, paranormal activities//
Yeah you'll see at your vicinity there's no chance of you killing me//
I can't die twice, I am dead inside already//
If you're coming at me steady you will meet my machette//
I'm choppin' off your arms and then I'll dice up your head//
You can drop your firearm, and burn up all the lead//
Call the cops, and warn the neighbour's//
I shot your daughter 'cause I wanted to rape her//
This vapour is green, I'll pour it in the spleen//
Rot the insides out, this isn't boring to me//
Watch 'em spit out their guts, this is a story to me//
And then I'll hit out that slut, metaphorically for fucking with me//
This shit is troubling, my thoughts are bubbling//
My brain is running and it's finding this funny//
Time's up, story's done, I'll see you all soon//
Steve Spag's the real Jigsaw plotting everybody's tomb//

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[maximum69]

I liked it good shit keep it up

[Steve Spag]

I liked it good shit keep it up

Thanks much man.

Anyone else?

[Arabian Shady]

i've seen ur earlier works steve, this 1 is reali one of ur best but its prety kl
peace

P.S - could u please review ma post as well, religious extremist

[Steve Spag]

i've seen ur earlier works steve, this 1 is reali one of ur best but its prety kl
peace

P.S - could u please review ma post as well, religious extremist

Merci. And I just did

[Kez]

Jigsaw? You mean from Saw?

Verse is good, imagery is best, but not many multis. Flow is great.

[Steve Spag]

Jigsaw? You mean from Saw?

Verse is good, imagery is best, but not many multis. Flow is great.

Yeah Jigsaw from the Saw series, lol. Figured I'd put a little punchline about that since it just came out this year.

But thanks for the compliments .

[SajN]

A good verse you dropped there. I've always liked what u've written
Keep up the good work.
And nice flow!

Could you feed my post as well ?
The name is Lot of thoughts

[Steve Spag]

A good verse you dropped there. I've always liked what u've written
Keep up the good work.
And nice flow!

Could you feed my post as well ?
The name is Lot of thoughts

Thanks a lot man, glad you're liking my material .

And I'm gonna go read your post right now.

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really slim shady lp'ish feel to it (not saying you tryna be eminem or anything just saying its sounds like that raw sorta style)

rhymes were decent not amazing, great flow, and nice description use to give the image

good work man

[Steve Spag]

really slim shady lp'ish feel to it (not saying you tryna be eminem or anything just saying its sounds like that raw sorta style)

rhymes were decent not amazing, great flow, and nice description use to give the image

good work man

Thanks much, and yeah I know what you're saying about the Slim Shady style. This isn't my style at all like I said at the begining, just wanted to try something different for once, lol. But I'm glad you like it, means a lot comin' from a vet like you on here, lol .