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Postby maximum69 » Oct 30th, '07, 19:43

i am going for something not so laid back, that will make your brain collapse//
and if there wasnt something to say about your dam raps, its there dam crap//
you motherfuckers use guns that cant clap, its time you all ran back//
you rappers out there want a mans ass, and theres nothing worse than that//
but enough of how punks suck, let me just indroduce myfelf to all you kunts//
my name is maximum i bow to no one, and your rule is over your times up//
and you think youre life stunk, well i dont give a fuck mine sucks //
so go ahead and reply but, be ready to get destroyed and then you can suck my nuts//
i am mc sent from outer space, and as soon as im done i will vanish without a trace//
i am a lost kid without a race, i was born yet i was born without a date//
i dont have much to say, except fuck you all and have a nice day//

tell me what you think leave some feed back
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
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