The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Hopeless Romantic.

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Hopeless Romantic.

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 1st, '07, 03:59

Wrote it to a beat.

I'm surrounded by loneliness, insecurities and such//
Drug depedencies are currently addictin' 'cause of sluts//
And the cunts that I've met, really fucked with my head//
I'm just a wreck, it's like I'm dead, yeah thanks a lot Jen//
And thanks to The Unnamed, putting fear inside my soul//
I got a fear of growin' old, fear of growin' all alone//
Never seem to meet a bitch that doesn't make me grow depressed//
I just want a good relationship without the sence of stress//
Someone stickin' by my side supporting me with all my rhymes//
Understanding I'm a rapper and I like to get high//
But it wouldn't change a thing because my passion's at it's peak//
And even though I don't show it, I'm romantic when I speak//
I will be all that you need, you will be the same to me//
I believe in destiny and that's the way it's gonna be//
So I hope you feel the same because you're not another whore//
I havn't met you yet but you're adored, open the door//
And come in//

Leave feedback please :)
Former Rap God
Image
Image
User avatar
Steve Spag
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3055
Joined: Jul 14th, '06, 21:08
Location: Top Secret.
Gender: Male

Re: Hopeless Romantic.

Postby SajN » Nov 1st, '07, 12:03

I like it :y:
Its deep and nice verse from you..

So .. Keep Going :y: :y:
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
User avatar
SajN
The Almighty
The Almighty
 
Posts: 14943
Joined: Oct 19th, '06, 18:04
Location: Norway
Gender: Male

Re: Hopeless Romantic.

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 1st, '07, 18:19

pretty kool man
it had meaning n flow, i enjoyed readin it !
peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
User avatar
Arabian Shady
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2953
Joined: Jul 17th, '06, 13:03
Location: 'DeM SaNd DuNeS... DUBAI!!
Gender: Male

Re: Hopeless Romantic.

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 1st, '07, 23:29

Thanks much guys.

I havn't done a deep verse like this in a little time, so I'm pretty proud of it, lol.

Anybody else got feedback? :)
Former Rap God
Image
Image
User avatar
Steve Spag
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3055
Joined: Jul 14th, '06, 21:08
Location: Top Secret.
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users