can i have some help???

[Marth]

eyo everybody i need some tips to write my songs better
cuz i know, i got the rhymes
and the liryc
but i can't fit them together really well
like u no, stick to the topic and write good rhymes

do u guys got some tips?? i'd appreciate it

[JMG]

What i do is figure about what im gonna write a bout and think of different ideas, and slowly piece it together, and take your time thats the key.

[Marth]

yeh i do that already, but tough the power of my rhyming is taking over the topic u know

[Enimee]

i jus start typing and whateva gets out comes out

[Steve Spag]

Just write what you're thinking at the time. Once you got that done, go back and re-read it and do what you need to do, weather it's make a rhyme scheme or add some multies in there.

[Arabian Shady]

i dunno who i sed this 2 earlier but the best advice i can give u is to start wid simple rhymes , u dont always have to start wid complex 1s, n always rememba to place ur rhymes in such a way that they captivavte ur reader evn tho he doesnt kno crap abt rap!
start small n they build ur way up

[Marth]

I"d like everyone's way to write
tnx for the tips i'll try them

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

your problem is your focusing to much on trying to be lyrical as fuck. the way to fix it is to not try force rhymes even if it leads to a 1 sylyble rhyme for a line, if that sounds natural and that keeps it on beat then thats what you go with.

example

the dreaded armaggedon fear spreading like beheading
quessing what is shredding the last gasp of hope
its hard to say goodbye before you feel youve had birth
its probably even harder to say goodbye to the earth

goes from using big worded ryhmes, to using simple ones, on a beat that sounds great, on text it looks to simplistic.

listen to people like nas ect. they can have lines that sound simple, then the next 3 lines are pure lyrical murder, do you look down on them coz they had simple lines...no coz they flowed and they sounded good on the track, you dont have to have multis and wordplay galore every single rhyme in all the lines, its all about a balance

text and audio are different ball games

[Marth]

tnx big time