In2 Tha Wind

[Rain Matrix]

I feel a chill it's real ya still see tha clouds I'll be a proud weather caster
behind us we line up to get yur rap first with a storm u can measure after

a release brings me peace as I stress life into tha next night in a new york town
it's either u or clowns it's on tha news floor now there all guessing who tore ground

no need to be rational this rap bursts in to action so with that first
if I rip through I won't miss u tha issues a reigning national disaster

a white man with no flight plans just a pen in my right hand as I write slang
over tha network as long my net works my sight scans it on tha map as ice land

it's not really worth much u won't see tha surge rush or a flooded path
tha one thing yur love did have was just cut in half by a fucking axe

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

flow is iffy, it comes and goes for me.

rhymes were really nice but you have had the same structure of rhymes for a long time now you should try rhyme bigger words instead of multi's of 5 one sylible words, you dont do it all the time just tryna give some constructuve feedback

[Arabian Shady]

i agree wid bar, ur styles wiked but its like evry1 expects the same thing agn, get wat i'm sayin?
but if u still wana continue with it all i can say is that u mite wana ease up on the multis man they lietally confuse me, its not a bad thing tho!!

over all i liked it!