Forever

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Forever


Verse 1

Music
Will last forever and that’s why
I know when people look back in time
I want them to say I had phat rhymes
That’s why I stay up till way past nine
So in this I can stay in it past half time
Hell last night I wrote hundred and a half lines
Like fifty bars not here to top these charts
Just here to drop these remarks
And leave you feeling like you got freaking starch
Up in your drawers I’m so detailed I effect your pores
I can heal your sores
And then come back and reopen your scars
My hearts broken so I am obligated to break your hearts
And make you fall for me
All you will learn to adore me
Then as I finish the over pouring
I leave and leave you crying
Would love to say sorry but I’m to tired
You say you love me but I knew you were lying
I fear trying because I think I will fail
But I’m ill on a whole new scale
So moving slow like I was a little snail
Moving through this hail
And someday yes one day I will make it
And yes one day someday you will face it

Chorus
Forever
My lyrics live past death
My spirit gives past death
Forever
My voice will echo through eternity
Cause noise seems to burn in me
Forever
My lyrics live past death
My spirit gives past death




Verse 2

Maximum at maximum speed
Maximum unleashed maximum off of his leash
Maximum about to scream his ing speech
To the streets back to the country
He will invade is great
And will be engraved in history this way
With a sledge hammer
He will say with a strong voice he will not stammer
There’s shit that needs to be handled
I love my mom my pops and her
But its time I go
Were I know I *** not return from
But there’s a stage that needs to be burnt up
So they stole from Mexico and I turned up

Chorus
Forever
My lyrics live past death
My spirit gives past death
Forever
My voice will echo through eternity
Cause noise seems to burn in me
Forever
My lyrics live past death
My spirit gives past death


Verse 3

This is my third anniversary
Since I started to spit every verse in me
And released the hurt in me
Using every word in me
Turning it into another song constantly learning
The fire inside is a constant burning
And the pain I feel is constantly hurting
That’s why I never stop this ill wording
I am always working
Trying to improve on what I do
Turning everything I feel into
The illest shit you’re ears will ever hear
I have been a lot of things but never
And if I die without finishing
Then just know that it will be interesting
To see how long my lyrics out live me
These lyrics I think of so swiftly
And if you will miss me or not
Did was my shit sick or hot
Will I make the first second third or fourth spot?
Till then I guess I just war on
And continue with one more song
Then another one then one more
Stuck with one whore
My pencil my one sword
And my one word singing from my inner core

Chorus
Forever
My lyrics live past death
My spirit gives past death
Forever
My voice will echo through eternity
Cause noise seems to burn in me
Forever
My lyrics live past death
My spirit gives past death

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concepts good, nice flow as well

lyrics are to simple, you need to use more wordlpay and multi's

but you got a good understanding of everything else so im sure with practice you'll get alot better

also man

I know when people look back in time
I want them to say I had phat rhymes
That’s why I stay up till way past nine
So in this I can stay in it past half time

in those bars you use "Time" twice, you should avoid doin that as much as possible unless with the beat and delivery its goin to work

keep it up though man