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Add a line poetry

Postby tkvloveangel » Mar 27th, '05, 01:40

A fun poetry game! Just add a line to the person who posted before you. If you think the poem is complete, start a new one. Hope this get's some more heads posting poetry. :wink:


Believe in you and me, I know it's going to be,
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Postby Shaz » Mar 30th, '05, 16:04

through the worst this world can throw,
to the best you can see,
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Postby SoniK » Jun 5th, '05, 20:25

may those suffering in 3rd world countries
end ther hell for free
R.i.p big proof

what now??
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Postby 4D » Jun 7th, '05, 23:21

All ur wallets n pockets let them empty
Be forgiven for not givin`in tha past n give now
U take 4 granted what are ur plenties
Let the poor 4get impoverished pasts n live now
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Postby SoniK » Jun 9th, '05, 17:31

kids starvin waitin for water to nourish
they lyk flowers with nutrients to flourish
how we gna no ther talents, if they got no chance
white people followin, da coloured set the dance
R.i.p big proof

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Postby TRshady » Jun 9th, '05, 17:42

there needs to be a change
but its the past we cannot forget
there will never be happiness
in parts of the world which we have placed in debt
learn from the past and move forward before its too late
we can all see there's a problem, now lets all set it straight
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Postby 4D » Jun 10th, '05, 13:55

Unite and let the debts on their plate plummet
Maybe famine, then becomes their forsaken past.
Support live aid in aid of the G8 summit
This one concentrated effort could really make it last.
One a second dies from no food in their stomachs
They need our help so let`s make it fast.
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Postby Guest » Jun 10th, '05, 21:31

when we, comeplain about having no fame
then u got these bitches over there in shame
got no bread, milk, no roof over their heads
I guess you could say, they practicly dead
but wait, stop and look around yourself
think to yourself about the money you waste
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Postby petrafied » Jun 11th, '05, 11:59

stop making false claims,
you only got yourself to blame,
all you saying is lame
shut up cuz you're ruining your name
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Postby oxide » Jun 13th, '05, 01:16

aiyo bud this ain't no rap battle
it's poety, go back to fuckin your cattle
sattle up and get ready to get it rough
enough is enough fuckin kid you shut up
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 6th, '05, 04:05

i'll try to get back on topic about kids starving
south park made it a joke with starvin marvin.
but is isnt something to laugh at
like all the people in the world addicted to coke and crack
and iby coke i dont mean the soda i mean the drug
the world would be such a better place if people showed more love.
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Postby xariuss » Jul 7th, '05, 10:00

love is a word, way to over-rated
then again it curves and is way to over-hated
your eyes fire, soon as you see a version of you who has made it
in the life of constant excitement, the one YOU wanted faded
but you want it, so you grabed your fists and you stated
too worship the devil so you get what you want created
sell your soul to the devil just to get to the next level
satanistic only to be the next rebel
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Postby derelict_90 » Jul 15th, '05, 21:47

With a cause doing what every the situatuion calls standing paralyzed with no legs so u fall withdraw from reality deposit some lies constantly blinking so no one looks at our eyes
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Postby DragonzEdge » Jul 19th, '05, 10:29

the pain is just a state of mind intended for the weak minded
people's love can cause the pain and leave your eyesight blinded
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