I'm new check this and come on show me some love I got skill

[Purple23Haze]

Only got but this life to live so find where your place is
I make truth move in a race of mazes truly...due...to, God graces
New shoe laces to finish the race shh choose the right
I'm outta the dark like moon light moon shine is fine
But I have wine ta dine and start singin lines like it's mine all mine
Start on the fifth inning catch the pitch bitch in a worn out mitt I aint quiting
I'm fit ta shit in the toilet before, I mean, after I soil it
Why do I have a limp noodle before the boilin
It's too fuckin big so I start coilin then I'm a gonna take to some coy women!
They love me cause I got cheeks like an apple I'm traveling ass whole
That rattles cages I got snake fangs I'm dangerous I'll pee in a anus
But you don't get my language jail talk but I guess thats not how you get famous!

[Tash8]

damn an impressive flow!

besides that it was weak.. your rhymes were simple, but the flow is great..

definitally an easy read..

[Purple23Haze]

Check this multis and metaphores party rift

As I check the place I don't hesitate I put haste ta take
A couple double shots of scotch on the rocks with a corona ta chase
I got on my puma romas so it's time play aint no time ta waste
We aint gettin younga by the days so i say give me what John Blazed
N I hope it's that hydroponic chronic and not acute
So I can get high fast like Tails in Sonic 2
I had some gin n tonic n it's ironic but I'm probably gonna vomit on my shoes
N who would of figured it goes beer after liquor never been sicker
I'm quicker ta fly through party snarling get outta my way
Bitch I had some fish and u better you crave the wave cuz I'm about ta ocean spray
N I'm gonna have ta write the Governor to pardon my French
But this hairy ass whole behind me is talking shit again
I'm fixated in the first of seven deadly sins the lusting after a vixen
It's literally slim pickings at this party not a lot of hardy girls sorry girls
You need some more hops and barely girls!

Show me a complicated rhyme puppy!

[Purple23Haze]

I was fukin drunk when I wrote thee above line sorry yo, no direspect!