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a free key exercise

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a free key exercise

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 18th, '07, 01:19

when I first wrote rhymes I used to Spark Up Trees Laughing
now when I battle opponents it's like Sparta Be Clashing

don't play tha matrix if u don't know tha Card Ya Defragging
I live inside my world it brings me Smarter Reactions

multi's and metaphors thats just Part Of Me Rapping
it's what happens next, that's when u Start Ta See Passion

if yur out there take Notes Snitch yur not tha one who Wrote This
u and yur lover are Both Bitch I'll bury u quick like a Snow Drift

without any Weapons thats tha Lesson as it carries On Urgent
yur Destined to get Swept In tha rain matrix has a Strong Current
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Re: a free key exercise

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 18th, '07, 03:25

Really really dope drop man. Personally one of my favourtie's from you. You stepped it up a notch this time man. Keep it up. :y:
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