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[maximum69]

yo i wrote this song a little while ago and its about a girl in my life , so yo check it out and tell me what you think

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Yo….

Verse 1

So what should I do I just can not figure this out
I’m still confused and shelby is getting all pissed now
She used to think I was cute but I’m sure she doesn’t now
And everytime I try to fix all this shit she flips out
See what happened was I left her a couple of times
And I said some cruel things in a couple of fights
But I said sorry and meant it when I apoligized
I told her I felt really horrible that I made her cry
I let her know all the reasons why I did what I did
How I got lost in the moment of every girl trying to toutch my shit
I just was surprised so many girls wanted to suck my dick
Yet in the end I was left alone with punctured wrists
Sitting there High and drunk off of a bunch of this
Weed and beer out back puking while a taking a fucking piss
It wasn’t soppused to be like this it wasn’t bitch
You mother fucking whore it makes you guilty doesn’t it

Chorus

I never wanted it to be, all out in the open
For everyone to see, so they could know it
I never wanted to do this, but I never chose it
And it is just useless, to keep it closed in

So I’m sorry I shouldn’t be involving you

I never wanted it to be, all out in the open
For everyone to see, so they could know it
I never wanted to do this, but I’m not the one that chose this
And it is just useless, to keep it closed in

Verse 2

You looked so inneocent when you were introduced
But look at all the fucking suicidal drama you produced
Leaving people with bloods arms yeah your so cute
I put up the rope but you tied the fucking noose
I should have noticed all the god dam signs
That inneocent smile that little sparkle in your eyes
The way you ignored me for the other guys
All the shit you said I should have relized they were lies
You said you would always love to think I believed you
You said that shit why do think I would leave you
Cause you said you would be there when I needed you
No I cant believe that I actaully wanted to be with you
Its nothing I did cant you see its you but I know youre response
“I don’t know” playing dumb like you don’t know whats going on
yo welcome to my life the mother fucking one man show
so can like it or not but I’m going to keep doing my jam yo

Chorus

I never wanted it to be, all out in the open
For everyone to see, so they could know it
I never wanted to do this, but I never chose it
And it is just useless, to keep it closed in

So I’m sorry I shouldn’t be involving you

I never wanted it to be, all out in the open
For everyone to see, so they could know it
I never wanted to do this, but I’m not the one that chose this
And it is just useless, to keep it closed in

Verse 3

Let me take you back to the january of o seven
When me and shelby said we loved each other and meant it
And if I hadnt I never would have fucking said it
when kelsey came I put my heart on the table and shelby left it
but not without shooting it with some poisened darts
and acted like she cared about me when shit was blowing apart
she never appriecitad that I wasn’t concerned about going far
shelby wanted my attention that was the only part
and that’s cause everyone else was smart and ingored you
you ruined the chance you had for someone to adore you
I hope your mother fucking proud of yourself for that one
Well keep dating all those loser I hope you have fun
yes I hurt you too but I have sayed sorry over and over
so next time your with ian I hope you lower your pants slower
remember when your were dating me and you said you hated me
well I do and carry the weight of that every day with me

Chorus

I never wanted it to be, all out in the open
For everyone to see, so they could know it
I never wanted to do this, but I never chose it
And it is just useless, to keep it closed in

So I’m sorry I shouldn’t be involving you

I never wanted it to be, all out in the open
For everyone to see, so they could know it
I never wanted to do this, but I’m not the one that chose this
And it is just useless, to keep it closed in

[Wallace]

It's very well done I had a little problem with the flow on some parts but I think it happened because english isn't my born language.

[maximum69]

thanks leave feedback on my other songs to!!!

lol

[pomp4434]

yo..record this shit..just get some shitty mic for cheap and get it on a file on your comp...i want a real version cuz this is top knotch man..no lies