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Postby maximum69 » Dec 20th, '07, 21:02

Give A shit

Chorus

Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wish I knew what the porpuse of living is
Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wonder if anyone is as pissed as this
Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wonder what remorse and forgiveness is
Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wish people listened when I was ripping it

Verse 1

Let me be upfront and honest with you
I do have some fucking problems with you
Cause bitch you brought this drama with you
And I didn’t even fucking want to kiss you
But that time we hugged you kissed me quick
But now that I’m gone you don’t miss me bitch
Yet when other guy’s are around your titties slip
Fuck it Time to get into the itty gritty shit
I’m plain pissed at the world I’m living in
And cause of a fucking girl I’m giving in
Or at least I was but now I’m doing some damage first
First I will kill shelby since no one can handle her
No fucking church or book has a god dam cure
So I’m ending it but first I’m going to strangle her
I’m not really going to kill her at least not yet
Because before I fucking do I want sex

Chorus

Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wish I knew what the porpuse of living is
Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wonder if anyone is as pissed as this
Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wonder what remorse and forgiveness is
Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wish people listened when I was ripping it

Verse 2

Thanks god for letting me meet that little harlet
Yeah I said it cause that’s what shelby barnes is
When I first met her she hadnt even gone that far yet
But when we split ways she got wet over ian’s hard dick
And that’s when everything really fucking started
We had are problems but they got worse after we parted
They look at shelby and see a pretty girl that’s retarded
But dam she’s sneaky and she knows were your heart is
And how to stab you right in it and twist it back and forth
Well fuck you you’re just a little dirty fucking whore
Fuck yeah I hurt you and I feel absolutley no remorse
I just apologize to you to see you freak more
And I hope I get a chance to hurt you even more then before
I want to rape you and leave you dead on the floor
Sitting here looking so nice and kind in a pew
You just don’t know me if you think I’m cute

Chorus

Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wish I knew what the porpuse of living is
Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wonder if anyone is as pissed as this
Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wonder what remorse and forgiveness is
Sometimes I don’t even give a shit
Sometimes I wish people listened when I was ripping it

Verse 3

I don’t give a fuck if you think I’m fake and I imatate
I’m jesse a crook serving my time as hells eternal inmate
My counseler looks at me like I’m just fucking insane
Then how do I write all this shit every single day
They put a good kid in with a teenagers and a mental case
And ever since then jesse has not been the same
I just write good raps I let life just slowly intergrate
I just never thought a fucking bitch would get center stage
Jesse never fucking bends or sways he fucking breaks
But you all wait till the day maximum awakes
Maximum is going to kill shelby and jesse real quick
And you going to love it weather you hate it or feel it
Yo sometimes I don’t give shit I’m just to angry
I’m poor a minority and the girl I love hates me
And its been like that for a while not just lately
You want me to watch what I think yo make me
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
maximum69
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Re: GIVE A SHIT (leave feedback )

Postby maximum69 » Dec 22nd, '07, 22:21

Feed Back ?????????
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
maximum69
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Posts: 30
Joined: Oct 30th, '07, 02:04


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