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Here It Is

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 22nd, '08, 19:09

...this is a dialouge

between my instinct and tha broke struggling artist in me
tha sensible side is green


there is a way man didn't u make plans u were dealt a great hand
tha locals are yur fake fans so u keep reserved like state land


thanks for caring, wow lyrically I'm bearing down at my parents house
to me it's all apparent now u want to find my feelings share n pout

u know yur rhymes rock but why do u let text lines talk
maybe u need some time off before yur fucking minds lost


it's not me when a knife goes slash or even when tha rifles blast
do u even know how a psycho acts thats a boundry I might roll past

man yur insane and wreckless and so yur text is go on mr. obsessive
why don't u get tha message think of what u want and make a check list


whatever u say mr. evil clone u should be terminated if yur heats so chrome
I don't want what people own actually to tell u I just want a peacefull home

I look at u and see a dream dying look matrix there are no machines rising
rain can't u see tha scenes drying don't waste tha drops ya seem wise in


yur nursery rhymes belong in a cradle dude and mine are a fatal tool
I'm sorry u think yur fables true call me out unless yur not able to

get a medic yur sick flows famished we've all had it with yur little antics
I heard u thought u were okay if so panic yur just a typical skitophrentic


in my mind are riots only I won't listen to some biased phoney
who are u to diagnose me I'm like a thief I don't buy it homey
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Re: Here It Is

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 23rd, '08, 13:01

I kept imagining two neo's standin opposite to each other n rappin
dope shit, really really wiked
peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Here It Is

Postby J Roc » Jan 24th, '08, 16:35

*Clap Clap* ..... Haha Dis Is My Favorite Drop From U .... Used A Concept .... Nice Rain
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Re: Here It Is

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 24th, '08, 18:16

great drop, inspired me to keep writing wicked, wacky stuff :worship:\


btw, i looked up the correct spelling of schizophrenic
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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