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a lil bit about my lifestyle

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 28th, '08, 14:44

im on the other side of the globe
with a gun in my ride down the road
watchin for spies called my foes
so my eyeballs are wide they won't sew
not even slightly, wanna try me, let's go

im a guy turned to pro thru my sniping, that shows
and most likely you'll be exposed when im firing
up close, don't fight me, you're slow
start biting the soil or goodbye to your soul
say hi to the Devil once you arrive to his hell hole
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: a lil bit about my lifestyle

Postby Xray » Jan 28th, '08, 15:50

it was good but you didnt express the good side of you..you just expressed the evil with in you haha which is good :y: but good side is also needed so in the future try to cover up everything about ur self like the last battle in 8 mile he expressed himself whether he was a trash or a junkie he expressed it all and you should never think that other people gonna laugh at you or somfin being true to yourself is more important :y:
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Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: a lil bit about my lifestyle

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 28th, '08, 19:11

thats why its called a lil bit about...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: a lil bit about my lifestyle

Postby SajN » Jan 29th, '08, 10:33

This was really good :y:
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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Re: a lil bit about my lifestyle

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 29th, '08, 16:26

I can't imagine tha terrors of urban warfare

throw up yur middle finger and empty a clip for me

by tha way nice drop
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Re: a lil bit about my lifestyle

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 29th, '08, 16:57

i don't want ne body to come here and go thru what i do everyday. it's been a lil over a year being here, 3 months to go...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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