My Version of Stan [scott]

[ilovemeghan]

picture this...
I'm scott, my ex gf is meghan, its two years after we broke up.
in the same kinda story line as stan. please dont hate, i know i didnt make this up, jus changed around the real stan by eminem. ok? good.
please comment =]

[Letter One]
Dear Meghan, I wrote to you but you still aint calling
I left my new email address and phone number at the bottom
I sent two letters back in autumn
But you must not have got them
There probably was a problem at the post office or something
Because sometimes I scribble addresses too sloppy when I jot ‘em
But anyways, my new girlfriends pregnant now, I’m about to be a father
If I have a daughter, guess what I’ma call her?
My girl wants to name her Bonnie
But I’ma name her Meghan, to remind me that I’m sorry
I don’t know what I did wrong but in the end you didn’t want me
Meghan I still think about you every day, I’m your biggest fan
I even got a room full of all your letters and your pictures man
Shit, I really hope you get this letter
Write me back, coz it would make me feel a little better
P.S I miss you
And I hope you miss me too

[Letter Two]
Dear Meghan, you still aint called or wrote, I hope you have a chance
I aint mad, I just think it’s messed up you don’t answer back
Our relationship was a strong one; if we were still together it’d be two years old
I stood outside your window in the blistering cold for four hours asking for you back but you just said no
That’s pretty shitty man; you’ve probably got a new boyfriend
I hope he loves you man, but he won’t love you more than I do
I aint mad though, I just don’t like being lied to
Remember when you left me; you said if I write you’d write back
I believed you then, but I was wrong
I still cry when I listen to our songs
When I’m having a shitty day I drift away just put ‘em on
I don’t really got shit else, but that shit helps when I’m depressed
I even got a tattoo of your name across my chest
And sometimes I even cut myself to see how much it bleeds
Its like adrenaline, the pain is such a sudden rush for me
You see, everything I say is real, can you hear the way I tell it?
My current girlfriend is jealous cause I talk about you 24-7
But she don’t know you like I know you though, no one does
No one can replace what we had while our love was growing up
You gotta call me please; I’m the best boy you could ever lose
P.S
We should be together too

[Tape Recording]
Dear Miss I’m – too – good – to – call – or – right - him - back
This will be the last package I EVER send your ass
It’s been one year, still no word, I don’t deserve it?
I know you got my last two letters, I wrote the addresses on ‘em perfect
So this is a tape I’m sending you now, I hope you hear it
I’m in the car right now, doing 90 on the freeway
Hey Meg, I’ve drunk a bottle of vodka, dare me to drive?
You know the song by Phil Collins, "In the Air of the Night"
About that guy who coulda saved that other guy from drowning,
But didn't, then Phil saw it all, then at a show he found him?
That's kind of how this is, you coulda rescued me from drowning
Now it's too late, I'm on a thousand pills now, I'm drowsy
Look, all I wanted was a lousy letter or call
I hope you know, I’ve ripped all your pictures off the wall
I love you Meghan, we could’ve been together
Think about it
You ruined it now, I hope you go to sleep and you dream about it
And when you dream I hope you can’t sleep and you scream about it
I hope your conscience eats at you and you can’t breathe without me
See Meghan…
[SCREAMING]
Shut up bitch!
That’s my girlfriend screaming in the trunk
I’ve tied her up, coz she aint like you
I won’t slit her throat coz if she suffocates, she’ll suffer more, and then she’ll die too
Shit I’ve gotta go, I’m almost at the bridge now
Oh shit I forgot, how am I supposed to send this tape out?

[Car drives off bridge; Scott drowns in the car underwater]

[Late Letter from Meghan]
Dear Scott, I meant to write to you sooner, but I’ve been busy
You said your girlfriends pregnant now, how far along is she?
And look, I’m really flattered you’d call your daughter that
But I just wanna let you know, Scott, that I do want you back
I admit that since I’ve been gone I’ve missed you
Please don’t think I took ages to reply just to diss you
I really was busy, but I kept thinking about how much I want to kiss you
But what’s this stuff about you liking to cut your wrist too?
I’m coming back to help you now, come on how messed up is you?
I loved reading what you said about us meaning to be together
I really do think that we need each other
So I’m coming back so once again we can see each other
When I come back, this time round I promise I’ll treat you better
I just hope you read this letter
I hope it reaches you in time
Before you hurt yourself, but I think you’ll be doing just fine
I don’t want you to do any crazy shit
Like this thing I saw in the news a couple days ago that made me sick
Some boy was drunk and drove his car off a bridge
With his girlfriend in the truck, she was pregnant with his kid
And in the car they found a tape, they didn’t say who it was to
Oh shit, come to think about it… it was you.

[Ka0t1c]

Never do something like that again, this is called Creative Writing, and by that it means, through my definition, "Use your own Words"

[ilovemeghan]

Actually in a way this IS creative writing. Changing lyrics to give the story another meaning is creative.. you need to read the top of my post, i said, PLEASE DONT HATE.. ffs

[Ka0t1c]

what i mean to say is that this is a bad idea... in my opinion that's not a good way to start out here.

[Tash8]

great JOB!!! u wrote some great rhymes there I LOVED IT..

holy fuckin shit, atleast use different rhymes, and maybe a different flow.

it's not ur version, it just eminem's version with different words

[Arabian Shady]

great JOB!!! u wrote some great rhymes there I LOVED IT..

holy fuckin shit, atleast use different rhymes, and maybe a different flow.

it's not ur version, it just eminem's version with different words

lmao!

[Hadez]

jesus christ.... get a tampon if you're gonna bitch about a girl you broke up with 2 years ago.

i am completely understanding about grieving for an ex boyfriend/girlfriend. but if after two years the bitch doesn't want to talk to you, leave her the fuck alone! and whether or not you got another girl pregnant is actually true or just part of the song, the idea of naming the kid after your ex to remind you that the girl still hates you is retarded. get some balls.

as far as the piece itself, gotta agree with kaotic, its not creative enough for Creative Writing.

[ilovemeghan]

wna see something i made up myself then, not changing words of an eminem song? then look at my other post on the same topic. then ul be eatin ur own words

LMAO hazi.. the story ent true.... get ur facts rite. i'm stil wiv my gf. we ent broken up.. its completly made up. u loook wel stupid now.

[Hadez]

wna see something i made up myself then, not changing words of an eminem song? then look at my other post on the same topic. then ul be eatin ur own words

LMAO hazi.. the story ent true.... get ur facts rite. i'm stil wiv my gf. we ent broken up.. its completly made up. u loook wel stupid now.

im pretty sure you're still the one lookin stupid.

[ilovemeghan]

nah ur the one looking stupid. u'v been signed up tp this forum for 2 years, ent u got a life?

[Makaveli525]

ya know... its kinda weird how you said you're her "biggest fan"... and alot of other things that dont make sense since you completely copied Stan almost word for word... at least be original... jeez...

[MavsPR41]

lol you changed 10 words..good job lil' nigga

[Dnalbandian_Show]

hahahahahaaha,you probably needed quite a time to put down these rymes
you know quite a lot synonims,Slim's very flatered,Marshal Mathers too
I feel true respect of you;just a joke,ima real fan,and would never call such a shit Stan
or somehow relate it to eminem,as long there's still this song,just listen
and don't create somethin you can't,cause you lyrics have no sense

[JMG]

fuck megan

[Jay-19]

fuck megan

LMAO