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[Arabian Shady]

i actually wanted to write something ppl could actually rap with,i mean like if it was an audio or something
ayte then,here goes nuthin



Lemme spit some shit somethin that no one's ever done
Ma background reveals i'm frm the 0-9-7-1
Livin a life full of crime and the lies that i've spun
out of bounds on the grounds that i'm carryin a gun
see you find me wid a mic,standin under this light
but u've failed to realise,like shady I am white
I'ma spit n i'll bite,fist you down like the tike
cause i'll do what eva it takes to win on fight nite
this shit is tight rite? see despite all the fights
i climb new height n still add a litlle spice
i'mm droppin step wise,nice and easy without gettin sliced
pickin up from half mast- its ancient history,i'm way past that
clappin gats together n rappin Gra-ta-tat-ta-tat,bitches
wave hands at that,i made history now,pack your bags at
that,i'm outa breath at last,not cause i'm rappin its
just cause i'm slappin sack ta ass,its C-L-I-MAX ta that
i'm out,but not before i whip my gat out and blast!

Notes: 0-9-7-1: country code of UNITED ARAB EMIRATES
TIKE: mike Tison, i just changed it to suit the flow

I'd reali appreciate reviews to this 1,
HIT ME BACK!

P.S:can you suggest a good name for this ?

[SajN]

Nice drop, but I don't think this was as good as your other drops, but that's just me.
Sometimes I lost the flow, but that's again maybe just me.
You some cool lines in there.

Keep It Up

Could you feed mine too, it's named "3rd verse"

[Rain Matrix]

nice drop from u man

tha flow was strong and u used dome bad ass rhymes

[Ka0t1c]

i thought it was good, especially for a freestyle but if u said mike instead of tike, i would've understood it better.

[Arabian Shady]

Thanx for your reviews

@Non Stop- I knew some ppl would have some problems regarding the flow,i tried real hard to keep the structure right and the rhymes meaningfull, sorrie u coudnt get it,try readin it again??

@Rain- dude i learn frm the best! i mean reali bar,4d,hayzi,you then sum influences frm pac,shady,notorius..list goes on thnx for chekin it out tho

@kaotic- lol i thought about that while writing the piece but it didnt SOUND right,know wat i mean??.
so i ended up combining the 2.thnx for the review bro

more feeds please!!
peace

[Ka0t1c]

ok, if u still wanna use in this again, try this: "fist you down with my might" i think that would be make your flow so much better

[Arabian Shady]

i could change that,no problemo

more feeds please
peace

[Steve Spag]

Sorry it took me a while to feed it, but it's pretty sick man.

"this shit is tight rite? see despite all the fights
i climb new height n still add a litlle spice"

That was my favourite part of it. Nice rhyming, sounds really good. Keep it up brotha.

[Arabian Shady]

haha
thanks alot for chekin it out steve,
i just keep usin review's to improve,so i reali DO appreciate constructive criticism n advice .
peace

MORE FEEDS PLEASE!!!!!

[Xplode]

nice flow bro

[Xray]

good read and xplode nice name

[Arabian Shady]

Thnx for chekin it out

@Xplode:i work hard to keep da flow strait,glad it worked out
@X-ray:lol,thnx alot man

peace

I need a review by one of the TR's sickest,hit me wid a review!!

[notoriouS-K-M]

That was great man. I read it before but the posters before me had said everything I could say. I think the flow was great. No problem with getting that.

Oh & by the way I love the title.

[J Roc]

Not Bad Man .... Potentials Nice Too .... Always Nice Ta Practise Ya Song-Writin Skills

[Arabian Shady]

HAHA

@ notorius:thnx for chekin this out man, glad u didnt have ne problems on finding the flow,i worked hard on it

@ J:lol thnx for the review bro,i've read sum of ur stufff 2,glad u liked mine

HUge propz for chekin it out guys

MORE FEEDS PLEASE

peace