Buried In Your Memories

[Ka0t1c]

remember me when i am buried in your memories
can you please carry on my speech, givin peace
if you disagree with my means, various enemies
i didnt cease to end the siege against these scary livin beasts (that's a fast part)

when are we gonna be-gin
cuz eventually's history
then we'll weaken to a mystery
everything we've meant to proceed this story
from leavin, keep the ce-ment pouring free

no i think "we've went" too intensensely towards our dreams
so now "pre-sent's" more instinct for the scenes
i found "any sense" has extinguished from beneathe
where "demons", to the kingdom's doors, hoards its' keys...






i am still working on this

[Wallace]

You need to find a better flow on it, the second piece destroy the flow. Basically is cool.

[Ka0t1c]

my bad but you're not reading it right, maybe my structure is off cuz this flows very smooth for me

[Wallace]

my bad but you're not reading it right, maybe my structure is off cuz this flows very smooth for me

Readin' again' I could see that I just used the verses on wrong time, cuz it have 5 verses, not 4. The flow is right, now I got it.